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Thursday 22 September 2016

Olympic Narrative

One sunny morning the athletics were training for the olympic. Valerie Adams went for a walk. while she was walking she was pokemon hunting“and” she ended up in North Brazil. But it was getting dark so she put her phone away in her pocket and suddenly she knew that she went far.


The coach was really worried he went to look for her outside and see if she’s there. The coach said “just wait and see what happens”. Valerie Adams tried to text her coach but there was no connection so Valerie went and knocked on the people's houses to see if they could help her.


The people said it's Valerie Adams and they were so happy they even  asked for her autograph and she said “of course, but can you help me get back to New Zealand so I can compete in the championship?”. Then  the people said “hurry up and get in the car so we can take Valerie Adams back to New Zealand”. Valerie said “it's too dark can you drop me off in the morning?”. The people agreed.


So they made her dinner and a cup of coffee Valerie Adams said “I appreciated what your giving to me”. The people said “that's ok”. Then they went to sleep. In the morning we all woke up early and had breakfast and after they had something to eat they all got ready to drop of Valerie Adams to New Zealand it will be a long drive.



When they were in the car it was so quiet and nobody said a word
Until they stopped at the gas station and put some gas in the car and they got something to eat before they go. They were almost there and it was nearly dark. Then they finally made it so Valerie Adams jumped out of the car and said to the people thank you for dropping me off I appreciate of what you gave to me.




Valerie Adams said you can stay over for the night and they said ok I will make dinner tonight and you guys can sleep in the spare room they said thank you for letting us stay here at your house Valerie Adams said thank you for letting me stay at your house and. It was time for dinner it was yummy they had butter chicken then they went to sleep. When they got up Valerie Adams made breakfast for them and then they got ready to go back the people said I appreciate of what you gave to us. Valerie Adams said I really thank you for everything. Then the people went they said their goodbyes and Valerie Adams had training all the athletics were worried even the coach was worried.

Thursday 1 September 2016

Hiwi the Kiwi

  One sunny morning I went fishing with my pa. he said “do you really wanna go fishing?” I said “yes I want to go and see different things about fishing”. When we were going my pa you need to go and grab all the things we need like a life jacket for me. We need a ruler to measure the size of our fish and a bucket of water to wet the towel. My pa said if you don’t have a life jacket on and something is going on with the boat you can float on it.


So we finally went and when we got there I was so happy that we had our own fishing rods I didn't know usually my pa says we have to take turns but I had my own. Then we started fishing and we caught one but it was small My pa said we have to put it back in the sea so it will grow. Then caught one it was a really big one I said what are we gonna do with it my pa said we are going to put it back because it might have babies. And the babies need time to grow. After we put the fish I caught one and I said to my pa can we keep this one he said yes.
One sunny morning I went fishing with my pa. he said “do you really wanna go fishing?” I said “yes I want to go and see different things about fishing”. When we were going my pa you need to go and grab all the things we need like a life jacket for me. We need a ruler to measure the size of our fish and a bucket of water to wet the towel. My pa said if you don’t have a life jacket on and something is going on with the boat you can float on it.


So we finally went and when we got there I was so happy that we had our own fishing rods I didn't know usually my pa says we have to take turns but I had my own. Then we started fishing and we caught one but it was small My pa said we have to put it back in the sea so it will grow. Then caught one it was a really big one I said what are we gonna do with it my pa said we are going to put it back because it might have babies. And the babies need time to grow. After we put the fish I caught one and I said to my pa can we keep this one he said yes.