Philip asked,'' mum are we going to the movies today?'' it was the after all. first you did to tidy your room and help put the dishes away and then we can go replayed mum Philip worked like crazy getting his room clean and helped mum with the dishes. This is going to be the best day ever explain Philip he was bursting with excitement.
I like that you've tried really hard to add speech marks in your writing. Remember to read your writing back to yourself to check that it makes sense Bryana.
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