Monday, 27 June 2016

A Better life

Trapped by an octopus


Walt: listen and remember to what we hear punctuate our paragraph

Last night mum made us spaghetti for dinner ,Umm yumm make the best meat balls in the world'' My sister remarked, I ate lots of spaghetti  ''Hahahaha'' I laughed as my my brother spilt sauce all over his white shirt. ''you've got sauce all over face too my sister added. I loved my makes me spaghetti.

                                      My score was: 5         

Thursday, 23 June 2016

A better life

Walt: Read with fluency and expression
Retell the story again in our words
Identify the main ideas

Tuesday, 14 June 2016


WALT: identity where speech marks go in our writing 

Philip asked,'' mum are we going to the movies today?'' it was the after all. first you did to tidy your room and help put the dishes away and then we can go replayed mum Philip worked like crazy getting his room clean and helped mum with the dishes. This is going to be the best day ever explain Philip he was bursting with excitement.