Friday 31 August 2018
Wednesday 29 August 2018
How to keep your body healthy
Explanation writing: Explain ways in which we can keep healthy.
Introduction:
Today I am going to give some little tips about how to keep you body healthy and fit.
Paragraph 1:
Here are some tips about how to stay healthy and fit, drinking lots of is good for your health and if you play sports you need to drink lots of water to keep you fit.
Paragraph 2:
Another way to keep you body healthy and fit is to eat lite some of the foods you could eat are vegetables, fruits, things that don’t have a lots of sugar or fat, some people like to be on a diet.
Paragraph 3:
If you really want to stay healthy you could train, some people train every single day some people like to train every second day, training is good for your health, sometimes people like to go for a swim, if you ever dreamed to become a rugby player or a netball player all you need to do is to train and never give up.
Paragraph 4:
If you can’t keep up with your training sometimes people love to go for a walk or a lite jog around the block.
Conclusion:
So i hope you have learnt how to keep your body healthy and fit, if your dream is to become a rugby player or a netball player you should never give up.
Introduction:
Today I am going to give some little tips about how to keep you body healthy and fit.
Paragraph 1:
Here are some tips about how to stay healthy and fit, drinking lots of is good for your health and if you play sports you need to drink lots of water to keep you fit.
Paragraph 2:
Another way to keep you body healthy and fit is to eat lite some of the foods you could eat are vegetables, fruits, things that don’t have a lots of sugar or fat, some people like to be on a diet.
Paragraph 3:
If you really want to stay healthy you could train, some people train every single day some people like to train every second day, training is good for your health, sometimes people like to go for a swim, if you ever dreamed to become a rugby player or a netball player all you need to do is to train and never give up.
Paragraph 4:
If you can’t keep up with your training sometimes people love to go for a walk or a lite jog around the block.
Conclusion:
So i hope you have learnt how to keep your body healthy and fit, if your dream is to become a rugby player or a netball player you should never give up.
Monday 20 August 2018
How to make your holidays fun!
My idea of a Fun School Holiday
Remember the T.I.I.C structure.
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Title - What you will be explaining
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Introduction - Tell your audience what the topic is about and what is to be explained.
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Information - Explain the elements or steps in a logical sequence
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Conclusion - Final summarising statement, an evaluation or comment about what you have explained.
Title
My ideas to help you have a fun school holiday!
Introduction
Today i am going to be talking to you about my holiday and how to make your holiday fun
Information
1st element
On the first week of holiday well not the whole week we missed a day and then played a game I had a rugby tournament versing other team like south, west and central and i was representing the east team, the first game we played against was central then west then our last game was against south and it was a tough game.
Information
2nd element
On the second week of holidays I did some chores before my mum and dad came back from work, on wednesday i went to gravity where you can jump and play games there is a lot of trandpaline, On friday i went to the movies to watch Ant man then we went roller skating it was difficult to skate because people just run into you.
Information
3rd element
On the 21 of july i went to Maybury reserve to do the Te Ara Rama matariki light trail, as we walked around the light trial we saw different types of lights like hearts, stars, jellyfish, Tiki, and there were people were performing an item, then at 9:30 people gathered together to watch the fireworks.
4th element
On the last day of the school holiday my family went to the movies to watch skyscraper it was a cool movie because it had the rock, its funny and emotional then it was time to go home and i didn't really want to come back to school.
Conclusion
So this is what my holiday has been, so there you go some good ideas to try out in your next holiday remember to do your chores before you go anywhere else, be good to your (Mum and Dad)
Happy holidays!!
Remember the T.I.I.C structure.
T
Title - What you will be explaining
I
Introduction - Tell your audience what the topic is about and what is to be explained.
I
Information - Explain the elements or steps in a logical sequence
C
Conclusion - Final summarising statement, an evaluation or comment about what you have explained.
Title
My ideas to help you have a fun school holiday!
Introduction
Today i am going to be talking to you about my holiday and how to make your holiday fun
Information
1st element
On the first week of holiday well not the whole week we missed a day and then played a game I had a rugby tournament versing other team like south, west and central and i was representing the east team, the first game we played against was central then west then our last game was against south and it was a tough game.
Information
2nd element
On the second week of holidays I did some chores before my mum and dad came back from work, on wednesday i went to gravity where you can jump and play games there is a lot of trandpaline, On friday i went to the movies to watch Ant man then we went roller skating it was difficult to skate because people just run into you.
Information
3rd element
On the 21 of july i went to Maybury reserve to do the Te Ara Rama matariki light trail, as we walked around the light trial we saw different types of lights like hearts, stars, jellyfish, Tiki, and there were people were performing an item, then at 9:30 people gathered together to watch the fireworks.
4th element
On the last day of the school holiday my family went to the movies to watch skyscraper it was a cool movie because it had the rock, its funny and emotional then it was time to go home and i didn't really want to come back to school.
Conclusion
So this is what my holiday has been, so there you go some good ideas to try out in your next holiday remember to do your chores before you go anywhere else, be good to your (Mum and Dad)
Happy holidays!!
Friday 3 August 2018
My holiday
My idea of a Fun School Holiday
Remember the T.I.I.C structure.
T
Title - What you will be explaining
I
Introduction - Tell your audience what the topic is about and what is to be explained.
I
Information - Explain the elements or steps in a logical sequence
C
Conclusion - Final summarising statement, an evaluation or comment about what you have explained.
Title
My ideas to help you have a fun school holiday!
Introduction
Today i am going to be talking to you about my holiday and how to make your holiday fun
Information
1st element
On the first week of holiday well not the whole week we missed a day and then played a game I had a rugby tournament versing other team like south, west and central and i was representing the east team, the first game we played against was central then west then our last game was against south and it was a tough game.
Information
2nd element
On the second week of holidays I did some chores before my mum and dad came back from work, on wednesday i went to gravity where you can jump and play games there is a lot of trandpaline, On friday i went to the movies to watch Ant man then we went roller skating it was difficult to skate because people just run into you.
Information
3rd element
On the 21 of july i went to Maybury reserve to do the Te Ara Rama matariki light trail, as we walked around the light trial we saw different types of lights like hearts, stars, jellyfish, Tiki, and there were people were performing an item, then at 9:30 people gathered together to watch the fireworks.
4th element
On the last day of the school holiday my family went to the movies to watch skyscraper it was a cool movie because it had the rock, its funny and emotional then it was time to go home and i didn't really want to come back to school.
Conclusion
So this is what my holiday has been, so there you go some good ideas to try out in your next holiday remember to do your chores before you go anywhere else, be good to your (Mum and Dad)
Happy holidays!!
Remember the T.I.I.C structure.
T
Title - What you will be explaining
I
Introduction - Tell your audience what the topic is about and what is to be explained.
I
Information - Explain the elements or steps in a logical sequence
C
Conclusion - Final summarising statement, an evaluation or comment about what you have explained.
Title
My ideas to help you have a fun school holiday!
Introduction
Today i am going to be talking to you about my holiday and how to make your holiday fun
Information
1st element
On the first week of holiday well not the whole week we missed a day and then played a game I had a rugby tournament versing other team like south, west and central and i was representing the east team, the first game we played against was central then west then our last game was against south and it was a tough game.
Information
2nd element
On the second week of holidays I did some chores before my mum and dad came back from work, on wednesday i went to gravity where you can jump and play games there is a lot of trandpaline, On friday i went to the movies to watch Ant man then we went roller skating it was difficult to skate because people just run into you.
Information
3rd element
On the 21 of july i went to Maybury reserve to do the Te Ara Rama matariki light trail, as we walked around the light trial we saw different types of lights like hearts, stars, jellyfish, Tiki, and there were people were performing an item, then at 9:30 people gathered together to watch the fireworks.
4th element
On the last day of the school holiday my family went to the movies to watch skyscraper it was a cool movie because it had the rock, its funny and emotional then it was time to go home and i didn't really want to come back to school.
Conclusion
So this is what my holiday has been, so there you go some good ideas to try out in your next holiday remember to do your chores before you go anywhere else, be good to your (Mum and Dad)
Happy holidays!!
Wednesday 1 August 2018
My idea of a Fun School Holiday
Remember the T.I.I.C structure.
Remember the T.I.I.C structure.
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Title - What you will be explaining
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Introduction - Tell your audience what the topic is about and what is to be explained.
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Information - Explain the elements or steps in a logical sequence
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Conclusion - Final summarising statement, an evaluation or comment about what you have explained.
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Title
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My ideas to help you have a fun school holiday!
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Introduction
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Today i am going to be talking to you about my holiday and how to make your holiday fun
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Information
1st element
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On the first week of holiday well not the whole week we missed a day and then played a game I had a rugby tournament versing other team like south, west and central and i was representing the east team, the first game we played against was central then west then our last game was against south and it was a tough game.
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Information
2nd element
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On the second week of holidays I did some chores before my mum and dad came back from work, on wednesday i went to gravity where you can jump and play games there is a lot of trandpaline, On friday i went to the movies to watch Ant man then we went roller skating it was difficult to skate because people just run into you.
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Information
3rd element
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On the 21 of july i went to Maybury reserve to do the Te Ara Rama matariki light trail, as we walked around the light trial we saw different types of lights like hearts, stars, jellyfish, Tiki, and there were people were performing an item, then at 9:30 people gathered together to watch the fireworks.
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4th element
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On the last day of the school holiday my family went to the movies to watch skyscraper it was a cool movie because it had the rock, its funny and emotional then it was time to go home and i didn't really want to come back to school.
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Conclusion
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So this is what my holiday has been, so there you go some good ideas to try out in your next holiday remember to do your chores before you go anywhere else, be good to your (Mum and Dad)
Happy holidays!!
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