Thursday, 16 February 2017

Why people need to drink water

Why people need to drink water
Remember the T.I.I.C structure.
Title - What you will be explaining
Introduction - Tell your audience what the topic is about and what is to be explained.
Information - Explain the elements or steps in a logical sequence
Conclusion - Final summarising statement, an evaluation or comment about what you have explained.

Why People Need to Drink Water
We need to drink water so that we can keep hydrated and also we need to drink water so we can get strong.
People need to drink so we can have good skin

1st element
We need to drink water so that we can keep hydrated?  
  • Skin fades
  • Our head is dizzy
  • Headache
  • We feel weak

2nd element
We need to drink water to keep strong?
  • Eat healthy
  • So we can live longer
  • To live longer
  • Drink lots of water

3rd element
We need to drink water to have healthy skin?
  • To keep our immune system healthy
  • To have energy
  • To stay fit and active

Humans need to drink water for survival. If we don’t drink water we don’t flush out our waste and it collects in our body causing. Everyone will not agree that water consumption.Many people often report that by increasing their water


  1. Great ideas Bryana. Remember to be bold and confident in your statements or reasons why we need to drink water. Keep up the good work.

  2. This is very informative Bryana. I hope you are enjoying your new class and teacher. Mrs Ilaoa is awesome. I wish you all the best for this year and look forward to hearing about the amazing things you are doing at school.

    Love from Miss Lavakula

  3. Wonderful to see your completed work. I can see you enjoy brain storming & writing. Keep up the hard work for 2017!