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Monday, 12 December 2016

Diamante Poems

Walt: write diamante,, acrostic and haiku poems around a theme

A diamante poem is a poem in the shape of a diamond. Each line uses specific types of words, like adjectives and-ing words. It does not have to rhyme

Thursday, 8 December 2016

Walt: Hypothesise what we think will happen during this experiment

Wednesday, 30 November 2016

Anmation

Bryana Changes from Team 4 Pes on Vimeo.

There are three main states of matter. Solid, liquid and gas.

The atoms in solids are stuck together. A table and a chair are solid. The atoms in liquids move around but are still stuck together. Water is a liquid. Atoms in gases move around freely. Helium in a balloon makes it float.

Homonyms

Camp Benston





Have been to Camp Bentzon before? If you have, I think it’s the best place to go for camp.

When we first got there we dropped our bags and went for a long walk. It was called Killer Hill. It was killing our legs and we were tired We had a rest when we got to the top of the hill.’’Then’’Leatham planted a stone on the top of the killer hill where all the’’other’’ stones were. We started walking again it was a flat path and nobody was tired it started getting high and we found a way to go and have a rest. We had lunch and played games on the rocks, we saw a stingray it was quite big. After that we played with the skipping rope it was so funny.




Then it was time to go for walk back up the hill it  was so tiring but we still did then it got up to the steep part. Mr Goodwin said ‘’if you feel like you're gonna fall you have sit on you bottom so you won't fall over”. After we did Kayaking we took our bags to our cabins then we had free time. Then we had dinner. After we had dinner we watched a movie that's was called The Princess bride it was a cool movie at 10:00pm we had to go sleep.

On the next day we did lots of fun activities like kayaking,sailing,abseiling,swimming,bivouac and burma trail The first one I did was kayaking it was so much fun Sheales kept falling out of her kayak. The we  went pretty far from the camp. We played a game and it was so cool then it was time for us to go back and all of a sudden it started raining.

My favorite activities was kayaking and burma trail. I liked burma trali because it was so slippery and funny Toni kept falling and my other favorite one was kayaking because Sheales Kept falling out and I liked how we worked together as a team.



        

    



Thursday, 3 November 2016

LOST IN THE FOREST !!!!

LOST IN THE FOREST !!!!!

One day my we went camping with kelly we went for a walk in the forest. One of Kelly’s friends went walking in the forest ‘’because’’she wanted to see what it look like. A of a sudden she was screamed for help but me and my friends didn’t know she was gone.

One of my friends looked be side her and she said kelly’s missing she’s gone and all of us were scared and we ran back to the our tents and stayed in there. until the next day they went looking for her. They couldn't find her so they went back and had something to eat.


Then kelly was shouting ‘’help! help! i am scared’’ kelly kept walking into heaps of bushes then she saw heaps of people kelly said can you help me please I am lost i can’t find my way home.


Me and my friends split apart so they can find kelly and take her back to our tents. Then samantha saw something it was people standing outside helping kelly and samantha said come with me I will take you back to our tents. But the people didn’t let her go they were bad and mean I said look there is samantha and kelly I think they need help so me and sally went and had a look and they were having trouble I said can you please let them go.



The people said NO because I to get home. Sally said that’s what we're doing looking for a way to get home. They said you can stay here until we find a way to get back home so we all went back to our Tent and packed all of

Our stuff and went again. When we got there we had dinner and we went to sleep. A few hours later in the morning The people were already awake and made breakfast for us I said thank you for letting us stay here.      

Writing test

One cold night me and my friends were sleeping one of my friends had a bad dream and there  name was called Kerstein,Anna,Nyree I got because Anna started screaming me and Nyree, kerstein went to have a look to see if she’s alright I ask Anna what happened she said I had a bad dream.


I said to her stop screaming because your gonna keep waking us up all of them said they were hungry so we cooked something to eat I feel so tired I am going to sleep ok all of my friends were so hungry they went of in the bush I didn’t care where they were going I just slept. They found strawberries on the tree and they picked it all of the tree.




They came back with heaps and they woke me up and I said do know what time it is it’s 4:00 in the morning shouldn’t be you guys sleeping Kerstein said look we brang some strawberries and I said wow they look so nice and we ate them all Nyree said I feel tired I’m gonna go sleep me to said Anna.



Me and kerstein went again looking for something to eat. They were scared when they went looking for some more food I said what's that I can see light me and kerstein went to have a look it was people hunting for animals we ran back to our tents and woke up Anna and Nyree I said we saw people hunting for animals and they might come here so we all went in our tenets and stayed there.





I can hear something it’s them pretend to sleep so they won't know where awake. So they looked inside our tent and they saw us sleeping they called all of their friends to come and take us. I said what do want from us did nothing and all you wanna do is take us away the people said because they needed help Anna said what kinder help they said help us get back home Kerstein said that's what we're doing finding a way to get back home.



The people said come with us you can stay at our place until we find a way to get back home I said ok lets go so we packed our bags and went with them. It was like 6:00 in the morning so we only got a little time to sleep when they woke up they had eggs and bacon I said thank you for having us.   

Thursday, 22 September 2016

Olympic Narrative

One sunny morning the athletics were training for the olympic. Valerie Adams went for a walk. while she was walking she was pokemon hunting“and” she ended up in North Brazil. But it was getting dark so she put her phone away in her pocket and suddenly she knew that she went far.


The coach was really worried he went to look for her outside and see if she’s there. The coach said “just wait and see what happens”. Valerie Adams tried to text her coach but there was no connection so Valerie went and knocked on the people's houses to see if they could help her.


The people said it's Valerie Adams and they were so happy they even  asked for her autograph and she said “of course, but can you help me get back to New Zealand so I can compete in the championship?”. Then  the people said “hurry up and get in the car so we can take Valerie Adams back to New Zealand”. Valerie said “it's too dark can you drop me off in the morning?”. The people agreed.


So they made her dinner and a cup of coffee Valerie Adams said “I appreciated what your giving to me”. The people said “that's ok”. Then they went to sleep. In the morning we all woke up early and had breakfast and after they had something to eat they all got ready to drop of Valerie Adams to New Zealand it will be a long drive.



When they were in the car it was so quiet and nobody said a word
Until they stopped at the gas station and put some gas in the car and they got something to eat before they go. They were almost there and it was nearly dark. Then they finally made it so Valerie Adams jumped out of the car and said to the people thank you for dropping me off I appreciate of what you gave to me.




Valerie Adams said you can stay over for the night and they said ok I will make dinner tonight and you guys can sleep in the spare room they said thank you for letting us stay here at your house Valerie Adams said thank you for letting me stay at your house and. It was time for dinner it was yummy they had butter chicken then they went to sleep. When they got up Valerie Adams made breakfast for them and then they got ready to go back the people said I appreciate of what you gave to us. Valerie Adams said I really thank you for everything. Then the people went they said their goodbyes and Valerie Adams had training all the athletics were worried even the coach was worried.

Thursday, 1 September 2016

Hiwi the Kiwi

  One sunny morning I went fishing with my pa. he said “do you really wanna go fishing?” I said “yes I want to go and see different things about fishing”. When we were going my pa you need to go and grab all the things we need like a life jacket for me. We need a ruler to measure the size of our fish and a bucket of water to wet the towel. My pa said if you don’t have a life jacket on and something is going on with the boat you can float on it.


So we finally went and when we got there I was so happy that we had our own fishing rods I didn't know usually my pa says we have to take turns but I had my own. Then we started fishing and we caught one but it was small My pa said we have to put it back in the sea so it will grow. Then caught one it was a really big one I said what are we gonna do with it my pa said we are going to put it back because it might have babies. And the babies need time to grow. After we put the fish I caught one and I said to my pa can we keep this one he said yes.
One sunny morning I went fishing with my pa. he said “do you really wanna go fishing?” I said “yes I want to go and see different things about fishing”. When we were going my pa you need to go and grab all the things we need like a life jacket for me. We need a ruler to measure the size of our fish and a bucket of water to wet the towel. My pa said if you don’t have a life jacket on and something is going on with the boat you can float on it.


So we finally went and when we got there I was so happy that we had our own fishing rods I didn't know usually my pa says we have to take turns but I had my own. Then we started fishing and we caught one but it was small My pa said we have to put it back in the sea so it will grow. Then caught one it was a really big one I said what are we gonna do with it my pa said we are going to put it back because it might have babies. And the babies need time to grow. After we put the fish I caught one and I said to my pa can we keep this one he said yes.

Wednesday, 31 August 2016

Tuesday, 16 August 2016

Describe spiderman

Peter Parker was bitten by a highly enhanced spider, which gave him superpowers that include strength, agility, spider senses and mankind with great power comes great responsibility.


spider man wears a blue and red costume with a mask to keep his identity a secret. He is protector  of mankind with great powers come great responsibility.        

Friday, 12 August 2016

Wednesday, 10 August 2016

Dictogloss

Country's that they host the Olympics must show they have captious to hold the games and invest their own money into them. Through the influx of tourists the hosting country hopes gang more money during the Olympics. Ultimately the IOC decide which country gets to host them .





In 2012, the Olympics were held in London, United kingdom it the third time London had hosted the games, the Olympics were hold there in 1908 and 1948. One of the upset games were shot put Valerie Adams claimed the gold medal only after it was found that her Belarusian opponent had tested posited for drugs.


My mark out of 10 is 7 because I forgot the punctuation                

Monday, 8 August 2016

Valerie admas



Walt: Create a character profile of an athlete in the New Zealand Olympic Team

Friday, 5 August 2016

Lizzy's Birthday Cake

holiday highlight

One Saturday I went to my cousins Kenzo’s 5th birthday It was held in Manurewa hall at a skate park. I went with my family. Lots of us got to ride on scooters and skates at the park. There was pizza, chicken, chips and lots of yummy food. I ate heaps.


After my cousin's birthday I went to my aunty house and when we got there we watched movies. In the morning we went to the park and then we went to Manukau and did some shopping I went with my mum and my two cousin after we did the shopping we had butter chicken. Then we went cotton we had a look around at some clothes.

Wednesday, 3 August 2016

Olymmipcs

The 2008 Olympics where held in Beijing china, It was the first time women could compete in boxing, Women from Brunei Qatar and Saudi Arabia were allowed to participate, This was considered a big deal because women in this country's were not even with men, The games in china were one of the expensive Olympics in history
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Friday, 29 July 2016

Emani's haircutting

Olympic History


Do you know about the ancient Olympic game?
It started in 776 BC in Olympia,Greece. There was only one event that was the 200 yard dash. Only men could compete in the nude. The games were a religious festival held every four years to honour the  god Zeus.


In 391 AD Rome invaded Greece. Two years later the Olympic games were abolished in 336 AD. A Frenchman started the Modern Olympics in 1896.

This year the Olympics are held in Greece and I am going to support the New Zealand Olympic.

Becoming a kiwi

Thursday, 7 July 2016

Play Reflection




Wailt: Use fluency and expression when reading aloud
Retell the story in our own words

My Real life hero

My Real Life Hero
A Hero is a person of notable courage who helps people. A hero is a person who can sometimes put their lives on the line for the sake of others.


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You are going to write a description and explain who a real life person in your life is. Explain why they are a hero, what they do and why you chose to write about him or her.
Planning:
Introduction: hook, explanation of a hero and what a hero does. Define hero in your own words

P.2 Introduce who your real life hero is and why you have chosen them
Explain in detail what they have to be a real life hero
More detail, more information, more explanation

P.3 Conclusion


Start your writing here:
A hero is a person that protects and defends others. Heroes also save people from danger and if they need help. Fire-fighters, nurses, docters and ambulance and police officers are all example of life heroes.
My Real life hero is my dad because when there is something wrong  my dad will go out and fix the problem. My dad will make sure there is food on the table and the bills all paid.When someone tries to come and rob our house my dad gets up and chases them away so they don’t come.
My dad is my hero because when I am sick my dad will take me to the doctors and stay by my side until I am better.

My dad is my hero and I love him.

speech marks

Where do “speech marks” belong. Go through this paragraph and put in speech marks. Make them red so they are easy to spot. When you’ve finished discuss your answers with a buddy. Copy and paste it to your blog.


As soon as Tim got his pocket money, he jumped on his bike and raced straight down to the shop. “How can I help you”? asked the shopkeeper.
Tim looked long and hard at all the ice-blocks and finally said, “I'd like a lemonade ice-block please”. “Here's your ice-block”. “That will be one dollar and fifty cents”, said the shopkeeper. Tim put his money on the counter and headed out the door calling, “
Thanks very much, as he went.


“Come back”, called the shopkeeper. “There's fifty cents change”.

“In that case”, said Tim, walking back to the counter, “I'll have a packet of chewing gum as well”. “There you are”. “I hope you enjoy it”, said the shopkeeper.” I will, said Tim”.

Monday, 27 June 2016

A Better life

Trapped by an octopus

Spaghetti

Walt: listen and remember to what we hear punctuate our paragraph


Last night mum made us spaghetti for dinner ,Umm yumm make the best meat balls in the world'' My sister remarked, I ate lots of spaghetti  ''Hahahaha'' I laughed as my my brother spilt sauce all over his white shirt. ''you've got sauce all over face too my sister added. I loved my makes me spaghetti.

                                      My score was: 5         

Thursday, 23 June 2016

A better life

Walt: Read with fluency and expression
Retell the story again in our words
Identify the main ideas




Tuesday, 14 June 2016

Moives

WALT: identity where speech marks go in our writing 

Philip asked,'' mum are we going to the movies today?'' it was the after all. first you did to tidy your room and help put the dishes away and then we can go replayed mum Philip worked like crazy getting his room clean and helped mum with the dishes. This is going to be the best day ever explain Philip he was bursting with excitement.        

Thursday, 26 May 2016