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Monday 27 June 2016

Spaghetti

Walt: listen and remember to what we hear punctuate our paragraph


Last night mum made us spaghetti for dinner ,Umm yumm make the best meat balls in the world'' My sister remarked, I ate lots of spaghetti  ''Hahahaha'' I laughed as my my brother spilt sauce all over his white shirt. ''you've got sauce all over face too my sister added. I loved my makes me spaghetti.

                                      My score was: 5         

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